By the the way you drew the looks and poses of them, you've really captured their personalities perfectly. For Emmy you've really captured her sassy personalty and her looks are correct, and on Julie, you gave her a more fun-type (yet still shy) personalty and the look on her are might be an improvement her, so props on that.
So, thanks for taking your effort to make this commission possible!
what are the others?
By the the way you drew the looks and poses of them, you've really captured their personalities perfectly. For Emmy you've really captured her sassy personalty and her looks are correct, and on Julie, you gave her a more fun-type (yet still shy) personalty and the look on her are might be an improvement her, so props on that.
So, thanks for taking your effort to make this commission possible!